CHAPTER IV

JONATHAN HARKER’S JOURNAL—continued

19 May.—I am surely in the toils. Last night the Count asked me in the suavest tones to write three letters, one saying that my work here was nearly done, and that I should start for home within a few days, another that I was starting on the next morning from the time of the letter, and the third that I had left the castle and arrived at Bistritz. I would fain have rebelled, but felt that in the present state of things it would be madness to quarrel openly with the Count whilst I am so absolutely in his power; and to refuse would be to excite his suspicion and to arouse his anger. He knows that I know too much, and that I must not live, lest I be dangerous to him; my only chance is to prolong my opportunities. Something may occur which will give me a chance to escape. I saw in his eyes something of that gathering wrath which was manifest when he hurled that fair woman from him. He explained to me that posts were few and uncertain, and that my writing now would ensure ease of mind to my friends; and he assured me with so much impressiveness that he would countermand the later letters, which would be held over at Bistritz until due time in case chance would admit of my prolonging my stay, that to oppose him would have been to create new suspicion. I therefore pretended to fall in with his views, and asked him what dates I should put on the letters. He calculated a minute, and then said:—

“The first should be June 12, the second June 19, and the third June 29.”

I know now the span of my life. God help me!

  • Zagorath@aussie.zoneOP
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    20 days ago

    The start of this has airs of domestic abuse, with Jonathan wanting to say no, but feeling it would be unsafe to do so.

    A few days before the next passage, and even longer before we’ll next see Jonathan!

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    19 days ago

    The hell with this Harker guy.

    First of all, he comes to this place after doing some background reading on it, so he doubtlessly knows the nobility here aren’t exactly saints. But wtf he’s got to get paid, right?

    So he gets there and Dracula goes out of his way to keep him safe from wolves and spirits; Dracula feeds him and serves him himself, and even warns him not to go to certain private rooms.

    But Harker ignores all that, and he breaks into the bedroom of Dracula’s wives even tho he knows its wrong. Frankly at that point Dracula would be legally justified in defenestrating him, but no, Dracula tells his wives to back off bc Harker’s under his protection. Of course this causes no end of drama between Dracula and his wives (which Harker feels absolutely no remorse for, let alone apologizes for). Dracula’s literally running up and down the walls trying to take care of his business as quickly as he can before this incompetent lawyer freaks out even more over… over what? Because the castle (which is in very dangerous territory) isn’t easy to get in and out of? Because Dracula has a blood fetish? (which he didn’t act on!) Because Dracula’s wives were upset that Harker broke into their bedroom? Because the locals hate Dracula? (which is probably why he wants to leave!)

    Harker’s a smoothbrained cuck who needs to get back to England ASAP not bc Dracula’s dangerous to him but bc if he’s away much longer his fiance’s going to get banged either by that dude she’s been sleeping with since childhood, or by that girlfriend she’s stripped down with by the fire. Harker needs to (i) come to terms with the fact that things might end badly for him bc that’s what happens when you work for sketchy crime-lords from dangerous lands (ii) apologize to Dracula for causing him trouble, and (iii) remind Dracula that even though they have different cultures and backgrounds, Harker is still sworn to confidentiality as his lawyer and in his fiduciary role will serve him as best he can for as long as he can.

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      18 days ago

      Damn, this is quite the hot take! I love it! I don’t agree, but I love it.

      he comes to this place after doing some background reading on it

      Did he? I got the impression that Jonathan is quite naive about it

      and he breaks into the bedroom of Dracula’s wives even tho he knows its wrong

      At this point he already knows Dracula is not who he says he is, and being the gothic hero he is, Jonathan wants to investigate. Dude’s literally crawling down the castle walls like a lizard, doesn’t appear in mirrors, and never eats or drinks.

      It also isn’t actually going against Dracula’s orders, because the door wasn’t locked. It just had frozen hinges.

      Because Dracula has a blood fetish? (which he didn’t act on!)

      I don’t think Jonathan actually knows this yet. Dracula was being weirdly possessive (“this man belongs to me”) and made a veiled threat about cutting himself being dangerous (“take care how you cut yourself. It is more dangerous than you think in this country”). Of the brides, he knows they wanted “kisses”, and he felt sharp teeth on his neck, but that could have just been some very mildly kinky foreplay; no serious indication it involves blood play.

      his fiance’s going to get banged either by that dude she’s been sleeping with since childhood

      fiancée* (the accent might be annoyingly difficult, but the second e is not. It’s one of a small number of words in English that are gendered.) But anyway, I always got the impression that he and Mina were childhood sweethearts. But maybe that’s me just projecting based on the Lucy/Arthur relationship.

      or by that girlfriend she’s stripped down with by the fire

      😂

      come to terms with the fact that things might end badly for him

      I think he has come to terms with that. That’s what this 19 May diary entry is telling us.

      bc that’s what happens when you work for sketchy crime-lords from dangerous lands

      I don’t think he knew Dracula was a sketchy crime-lord, or had any reason he should have known it.

      (ii) apologize to Dracula for causing him trouble, and (iii) remind Dracula that even though they have different cultures and backgrounds, Harker is still sworn to confidentiality as his lawyer and in his fiduciary role will serve him as best he can for as long as he can.

      I can’t see how either of those would have helped. Dracula does not come across to me as a typical crime-lord who might have such questions of honour as important to him and for whom such a kowtowing would change anything.

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        18 days ago

        Jonathan is quite naive about it

        On May 3 Harker talks about going to the library and reading up on that part of the world. On his ride in, he is able to guess at various people’s ethnicities. Also, the Balkans were well-known for having a history of conflict; nobody was surprised that the Great War started with an assassination there several years later.

        At this point he already knows Dracula is not who he says he is,

        I don’t believe Dracula has made any claims regarding his nature. If he wants to crawl around outside his castle, he’s certainly entitled to.

        In fact, I refer to him as a “crime-lord” but on second thought this may be mistaken; it’s not yet clear exactly what crimes Dracula has committed. My intuition is that in the Austro-Hungarian empire of the late 1800s the nobility were still a privileged class, though not to the extent as in medieval times. What kind of generally-questionable activities could they perform with legal impunity? I don’t know, but it seems like the sort of thing a half-decent lawyer would determine before going there.

        It also isn’t actually going against Dracula’s orders, because the door wasn’t locked. It just had frozen hinges.

        Dracula had actually given two relevant standing orders.

        First, on May 7, Dracula said “You may go anywhere you wish in the castle, except where the doors are locked” On May 15, Harker says “the door was locked, and the key was gone! That key must be in the Count’s room; I must watch should his door be unlocked, so that I may get it and escape.” This clearly demonstrates Harker’s intent to circumvent Dracula’s instruction. Later that day he says

        I found one door at the top of the stairway which, though it seemed to be locked, gave a little under pressure. I tried it harder, and found that it was not really locked, but that the resistance came from the fact that the hinges had fallen somewhat, and the heavy door rested on the floor. Here was an opportunity which I might not have again, so I exerted myself, and with many efforts forced it back so that I could enter.

        Note that (i) Harker admits that the door “seemed to be locked.” Thus it was possible that Dracula too may have believed it to be locked. (ii) Harker describes that he “exerted myself, and with many efforts forced it back so that I could enter”, meaning that it was not easily entered. Thus it was also possible that Dracula believed Harker was unable to enter the room – meaning that although it did not have a lock, it was possible that Dracula believed the room was inaccessible to Harker and thus did not require special notice. (iii) Harker admits “Here was an opportunity which I might not have again” suggesting that if Dracula discovered the room to be vulnerable to Harker’s intrusions, he might remedy the situation.

        Harker isn’t just some rando coming over to watch the game and looking for the bathroom. Harker is a foreign guest in the hereditary domain of a member of the ruling class. Harker is also the lawyer of a client who has paid for his expertise (as well as for transport and board.) In both roles, it is Harker’s duty to confer with Dracula to determine whether entering that room is in keeping with Dracula’s stated intent.

        Second, on May 12, Dracula warns that “should you leave these rooms you will not by any chance go to sleep in any other part of the castle”. On May 16th Harker says that after forcing his way into the bedchamber of Dracula’s wives: “…I felt sleepy. The Count’s warning came into my mind, but I took a pleasure in disobeying it.” So clearly he remembered the warning, decided to ignore it, and admits taking pleasure in doing so.

        Conclusion: Harker is a crafty gloating monster who cannot be trusted in your house. I would certainly never invite him in.

        (ii) apologize to Dracula for causing him trouble, and (iii) remind Dracula that even though they have different cultures and backgrounds, Harker is still sworn to confidentiality as his lawyer and in his fiduciary role will serve him as best he can for as long as he can.

        I can’t see how either of those would have helped. Dracula does not come across to me as a typical crime-lord who might have such questions of honour as important to him and for whom such a kowtowing would change anything.

        First of all, this is not kowtowing, this is just stating Harker’s professional obligations. It’s OK tho, bc Harker seems to have forgotten all about those obligations too. Dracula recognizes this and has already gotten to the stage where he’s looking for another lawyer.

        Second, it’s not yet clear how Dracula has been dishonorable. On the contrary, he’s been exceptionally polite and attentive and has worked closely and effectively with Harker. Harker may point to one incident on May 8 when Harker was bleeding all over the place and Dracula’s “eyes blazed with a sort of demoniac fury” and made a gesture to his throat (which only made contact with a necklace). Admittedly at that time Dracula disposed of a shaving mirror by throwing it out the window – Harker is welcome to bill him for that, but it is not clear that Dracula acted dishonorably in doing so. It might even be argued that feelings of empathy had rendered Dracula so upset that his guest had suffered harm (by the shaving-cut) that he’d impulsively removed the shaving-apparatus, explaining that “this is the wretched thing that has done the mischief.”

        In conclusion, I haven’t read the book so I dunno, maybe Dracula turns out to be some kind of evil monster who denies health-care to little kids or something. Personally if I were him I’d go to the highest mountaintop, build a trebuchet, put Harker in the sling, and shoot him in the general direction of the Black Sea. More charitably, Harker deserves a brief period of incarceration in Austria-Hungary after which he should be deported in chains and disbarred.

        p.s. I hope his fiancee ends up with someone else!

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    12 days ago

    I can’t help but imagine Jonathan Harker as Nicholas Hoult. I know some critics didn’t appreciate his acting in Nosferatu, but I found him perfect as the naïve, pretty-faced, fiancé.