For a slogan to be remembered and chanted for years, it needs to be three words. Each word blmust be one syllable. These two chants are for the times and pair well imo.
For a slogan to be remembered and chanted for years, it needs to be three words. Each word blmust be one syllable. These two chants are for the times and pair well imo.
Why not just “freedom for everyone”, that’s three words?
theirs makes a better protest chant. 3+1 beats per line, and they rhyme. yours, i think, better suited as a slogan or tagline on printed materials and signs.
It may sound nice but it’s still gibberish